Do you say “lock eyes” in your script? Everyone else does too.

If it’s there, maybe think about getting rid of it.

I see it all the time.

Sigh.

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4 responses to “Do you say “lock eyes” in your script? Everyone else does too.

  1. Ian

    What would the alternative be?

    • yourscreenplaysucks

      Good question!

      They make juicy eye contact.
      They stare at each other.
      Eyes on the prize.
      Eyes welded.
      Laser eyes focused on the antique jewel-encrusted handbag.

      I don’t know!
      It’s late and I’ve been up since 3:00.
      Well, it’s not THAT late, but I’m worn out.

      I see it a LOT and if I have, so have readers.

  2. A nostril flaring contest ensues.

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