LESLIE DIXON… super duper writer… LIMITLESS conversation

We were fortunate enough to speak to Leslie Dixon in my class this past week. She was very kind to share her time, expertise, and experience with the students.

We read the script for LIMITLESS before the class, then watched the movie and read along with the screenplay. There were interesting changes from script to screen. The script is based on The Dark Fields by Alan Glynn. She kept basically the first act of the book and then added A LOT after that. The main set up was there, but she elaborated and expanded on the jeopardy.

My first nugget of learning for you via Ms. Dixon would be to do what we did, which is read along with the movie.

http://www.joblo.com/scripts/limitless.pdf

What I strongly urge you to do is PRINT the screenplay. Print it two pages or four pages to the page if you want, but print it. Then, go through it carefully and watch the movie with red pen in hand and cross out dialogue or bits of action that were cut. It is VERY VERY VERY instructive to see what got written that either didn’t get shot, or didn’t make it out of the editing room. (No such thing as an editing room floor now that there are no pieces of film to drop on said floor — plus, editors never drop film on the floor anyway; they keep it clean and roll it up with the sound and file it away neatly)

There are bunches of examples of dialogue that got cut because it was slightly, even obliquely, repetitive. Barely repetitive means repetetive. Not what you want.

It’s difficult in our own work to see what my DON’T REPEAT rubber stamp actually means. You ask: “What does it mean, for dialogue to say the same thing twice?” Here in glowing color (the movie) and black and white (the script) is a perfect learning experience. It will blow your mind when you see dialogue — written by one of the most talented, most successful (and generous with her time) screenwriters of the past several decades — that gets cut.

In the next few days, I’ll tell you a couple of nuggets of storytelling gold that came from Ms. Dixon via the Q&A after the movie.

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7 responses to “LESLIE DIXON… super duper writer… LIMITLESS conversation

  1. Terry Allen

    Thanks for the advice…I have the tendency to hammer something home…in eight different ways.
    I guess in a screenplay saying it once is enough, but in real life it seems 8 times or 80 is not enough.

  2. Colleen

    Another reason to re-watch Limitless? I’m in!

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  4. Ebony Kaims

    me too! I ordered the movie on Comcast just to do such!!!

  5. I like the film and have seen it several times on youtube, even in French and Italian. But don’t ask me to look at the script comparing it to the film. I doubt if even the author has the energy to do this. She said that working on the script had taken years off her life and that she needed a lot of downtime now and would not be able to work on another script for a while.

    • yourscreenplaysucks

      Indeed, you’re correct. She hasn’t written anything since LIMITLESS… at least, anything that has been produced. She was executive producer on GONE GIRL, and is currently got THE BIRDS (as writer) in development for Michael Bay. Fingers crossed. Anything she writes, I’d like to see.

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